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[flipthemaster]

Im going against these members in a rap battle at another forum tell me if you think this is good enough to take them down?
The members name's are not related to any members of xgen.

[flipthemaster]

At first I was trying to be fair
but you pissed me off, now you don't got a prayer.
and As I turn my back for a sec, I look and see
there’s three fake mc's trying to bark at me
and chrono stunk most especially
chrono says "I ain't even black and I can still punk your ass"
all he's really doing is crackin out white trash.
funky fresh is how you show your guest
but the way you do it id suggest you failed your quest
you bite, I fight back, move and you’ll get wackd.
cause my stiles like shaq dunkin 200 pounds a stack, never going back
never giving an inch and shooting like a prince.
damn straight mess with me and, your on my dinner plate.
test me, you will incinerate
cause whoever I fight I eliminate.
Now Dymez you start talking about spell check
this is a battle Dymez, Come on what the heck?
you say “read a dictionary, something extraordinary”
nope! you read a thesaurus
cause your stuff is like a stone age tyrannosaurus.
and Ice T what did I tell yee?
I said watch out the champ is coming!
yet you ignore me and keep on strumming
you gave me three strikes, but you should have gave me none
doesn’t really matter cause I only need one.
I warned you on the mountain side from my wisdom and my stride
you slip, you fall
saw it coming and didn’t do a thing at all
you pay the price, now watch your throat
cause you my friend are like a goat
to old, to slow, all you do is gloat.
You say "go get a tape"
I think "you’re right, it would keep your mouth straight
cause all your rep is out of date”

Now check this, my persistence to resistance is futile
look at my profile, see my stile?
does it say flip the disaster no!
how bout flip the procaster,
try again my slow friend it's flip the master.
Now pump up the volume and go drink a caster
cause im laughing at you three
seriously you thought you could compete with me?

[RocketSoldier]

1. Rap sucks.
2. The rhymes are very bad
3. Don't bother

Try harder.

[Mr. Anderson]

so so. i dont particularly like rap, but the rhymes dont have rythym.

[Teh,Noob]

At first I was trying to be fair
but you pissed me off, now you don't got a prayer.
and As I turn my back for a sec, I look and see
there’s three fake mc's trying to bark at me
and chrono stunk most especially
chrono says "I ain't even black and I can still punk your ass"
all he's really doing is crackin out white trash.
funky fresh is how you show your guest
but the way you do it id suggest you failed your quest
you bite, I fight back, move and you’ll get wackd.
cause my stiles like shaq dunkin 200 pounds a stack, never going back
never giving an inch and shooting like a prince.
damn straight mess with me and, your on my dinner plate.
test me, you will incinerate
cause whoever I fight I eliminate.
Now Dymez you start talking about spell check
this is a battle Dymez, Come on what the heck?
you say “read a dictionary, something extraordinary”
nope! you read a thesaurus
cause your stuff is like a stone age tyrannosaurus.
and Ice T what did I tell yee?
I said watch out the champ is coming!
yet you ignore me and keep on strumming
you gave me three strikes, but you should have gave me none
doesn’t really matter cause I only need one.
I warned you on the mountain side from my wisdom and my stride
you slip, you fall
saw it coming and didn’t do a thing at all
you pay the price, now watch your throat
cause you my friend are like a goat
to old, to slow, all you do is gloat.
You say "go get a tape"
I think "you’re right, it would keep your mouth straight
cause all your rep is out of date”

Now check this, my persistence to resistance is futile
look at my profile, see my stile?
does it say flip the disaster no!
how bout flip the procaster,
try again my slow friend it's flip the master.
Now pump up the volume and go drink a caster
cause im laughing at you three
seriously you thought you could compete with me?
Damm wiggers....:mad:

[Kevim]

If you came up with ALL of that on the top of your head, you are amazing. I don't even know what you were trying to rap about.
Your rhymes suck more then yo' motha's mouth.
And don't try to fight back cause I'll come back strong.
I can continue these rhymes all night long.
And here are the problems with yours.
The rhythem is off, and I have to go back to find the words...
That rhyme, and don't even get me started on your style
You sound like an 8 year old who just watched 8th Mile
And remember this... raps are about quality not quantity
unlike the men yo' momma sleeps with periodically.

[Teh,Noob]

If you came up with ALL of that on the top of your head, you are amazing. I don't even know what you were trying to rap about.
Your rhymes suck more then yo' motha's mouth.
And don't try to fight back cause I'll come back strong.
I can continue these rhymes all night long.
And here are the problems with yours.
The rhythem is off, and I have to go back to find the words...
That rhyme, and don't even get me started on your style
You sound like an 8 year old who just watched 8th Mile
And remember this... raps are about quality not quantity
unlike the men yo' momma sleeps with periodically.
:mad:!!ANOTHER ONE!!:mad:...where are their breeding grounds?
*cocks shotgun specially made for killing wiggers*

[Kevim]

:mad:!!ANOTHER ONE!!:mad:...where are their breeding grounds?
*cocks shotgun specially made for killing wiggers*

I appologize so very deeply for liking hip-hop music. I know, I am a terrible person for listening to music black people make and occasionaly immitating them. From now on, I'll be sure to be an ignorant **** whenever you are on.

[Teh,Noob]

I appologize so very deeply for liking hip-hop music. I know, I am a terrible person for listening to music black people make and occasionaly immitating them. From now on, I'll be sure to be an ignorant **** whenever you are on.
Thank you for understanding and I appologize if I offended you:)

[caniverous toilet]

I appologize so very deeply for liking hip-hop music. I know, I am a terrible person for listening to music black people make and occasionaly immitating them. From now on, I'll be sure to be an ignorant **** whenever you are on.

Racist!

[Broken]

lacking.

[e p]

Racist!

:rolleyes:

And a rap battle? Pfft...

[gunsniperz]

If the forum is able2know, you'll do fine. if it's letsbeef, you're screwed.

Edit:

The people at letsbeef are insanely awesome. I posted lyrics at able2know, and owned somebody. Then, I posted the same exact at letsbeef, and I got severely owned.

[Karl]

Rap is basically poetry. Get some rhythm. Like Kevim said, quality, not quantity. A few well formed rhymes are better than one hundred badly made ones.