Logo

[Arca]

I'm making a logo for some thing me and my friends are doing...and since I'm getting used to flash how's this? BE HONEST critism is good for the soul( plus I know the ending is kinda bad....)
http://img477.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kaboom4ga.swf

(with sound now) and a background

[Teh Old Conglomerate]

Hmm not bad..lol i cant do ****

[Himora]

It's a little simple considering the backround is white and the text is a plain font but the bombs look good.

The worst part is the end, but it has potential. Here is a tut on explosions I found:

http://www.tutorialoutpost.com/count/2585

[Steven]

Make the letters fall a bit faster and up the frame rate. The bombs look great. :)

[Arca]

It's a little simple considering the backround is white and the text is a plain font but the bombs look good.

The worst part is the end, but it has potential. Here is a tut on explosions I found:

http://www.tutorialoutpost.com/count/2585 (http://www.tutorialoutpost.com/count/2585)

Told you so but thanks I'll try to make that part better...
EDIT Ok I put some sound and changed the explosion what do you think now?

[denacioust]

needs work but it does show potential. Keep at it.

[Steven]

Definetaly better.

[Shintaja]

meh i made a logo too this http://img444.imageshack.us/my.php?image=womopeningcredits9aa.swf but urs good too ^^. my logo takes a lil time till it moves.

[Arca]

I'm thinking to put a backround on what do you guys think? what should it be?...Then again I like white as it is....

[Soon to be flash master]

have a gradient, i do yuor own shading, maybe even drop it onto a road out on the country side

[Arca]

Ok I put on a background here it is
http://img477.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kaboom4ga.swf

:)

[Locker0]

mmm its cool and the backround too you cna change the letters and make the boom! more real

[Matt]

Thats good. Just the background makes the letters on one side harder to read.

[Arca]

All right although I can't really work on it now I'm going through Exams sooo but I'll remeber that