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dragon,clan,leader56
04-09-2009, 01:41 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/w18jv4.png
Note this is my first map so go easy on me and give me ideas if you have some =D

Jaydor
04-09-2009, 01:48 PM
Half walls, patchwork ground, tile mistakes, zero cover, bad spawn points, and repetitive filler tiles equals instant fail.

Alphasas
04-09-2009, 01:48 PM
Terrible... What the hell is up with the letters in the map?

Jaydor
04-09-2009, 01:49 PM
Terrible... What the hell is up with the letters in the map?

Those are supposed to be letters? All I could make out was gibberish.

Alphasas
04-09-2009, 01:54 PM
Well the one in the middle looks like an 'E' but the other ones are fair game... it definitely isnt a word...

dragon,clan,leader56
04-09-2009, 01:57 PM
It was supposed to spell xgen. Man...

Alphasas
04-09-2009, 02:02 PM
Well it didnt... Back to the drawing board

dragon,clan,leader56
04-09-2009, 02:02 PM
lol yep.......=(

jrmagic360
04-09-2009, 02:26 PM
I saw "XGen" clearly.

I'll give you constructive criticism, it's okay. The XGen in the middle gives it a unique look, just the base needs work.

Jaydor
04-09-2009, 03:28 PM
I saw "XGen" clearly.

I'll give you constructive criticism, it's okay. The XGen in the middle gives it a unique look, just the base needs work.

I do not see how you could possibly see Xgen.

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04-09-2009, 03:35 PM
I do not see how you could possibly see Xgen.
Either your Mentally Impaired, or even worse, you're Schizophrenic.

Ninjasnip
04-09-2009, 04:24 PM
Hey go easy on him the XGEN was creative but I guess it does need a little work 5/10 keep trying.

Angelz Blood
04-09-2009, 08:37 PM
First of all, for the people saying they don't see XGen, try reading the orange tiles, not the green ones.

Anyways, +1 for being first map, -1 for single walls, -1 for no cover other than the walls, -1 for wrong half of sewer wall, and -1 for bad weapon and spawn placement, and finally, -0.5 for the XGen thing, it's creative, but it looks sort of ugly.

Overall: 6.5/10, in other words, bare pass.

Jaydor
04-09-2009, 08:46 PM
First of all, for the people saying they don't see XGen, try reading the orange tiles, not the green ones.

Anyways, +1 for being first map, -1 for single walls, -1 for no cover other than the walls, -1 for wrong half of sewer wall, and -1 for bad weapon and spawn placement, and finally, -0.5 for the XGen thing, it's creative, but it looks sort of ugly.

Overall: 6.5/10, in other words, bare pass.

Oh, now I see it.

hackzor1337
04-09-2009, 09:08 PM
not that good

dragon,clan,leader56
04-10-2009, 08:05 PM
kk guys i'll do better next time. And thanks to those who gave me good/alright ratings.

KHJGDF
04-10-2009, 08:12 PM
Considering this is ur first map, this is well made.
Rooms are placed properly though I see lots of tile/wall mistakes.
I give this 6/10