Please Look at My Map!

[sportingrules]

What do you guys think of my map?

P.S This is my first map so no flaming! Thanks all! :D


http://s360.photobucket.com/albums/oo44/reaperleader/?action=view&current=canvas.png

[darkComp]

It's alright for a first map, but I think that it's cramped in certain parts and that there seems to be an extremely "closed" feeling to it as well. Also, you could have scattered the weapons more equally, the bottom region is somewhat empty. 7.5/10

[CriticalX]

Holy crap, that's the best Office map I've seen in a while. All I would recommend is getting rid of the two pits, and changing the blue desk near the bottom to it's actual size, instead of making it longer by adding chairs.

9.9/10

[xfactor.guitarist]

it's amazing!!! a few problems in my eye, some weapons too close, but i give it a 4/1!!!

[sportingrules]

Is 4/1 good or bad?

[CriticalX]

Obvious 4/1 means 40/10 so yes it's very good.

[sportingrules]

If you want I can change some stuff.

[sportingrules]

So i'm doing good so far?

[Toastboy]

Nice job Tyler! (Which Sportingrules is my brother) ^^

[sportingrules]

Thanks Calvin.

[TheRazorBlade]

Amazing Map 20/10

[sportingrules]

Thanks.

[BridgeofStraw]

wow vary good for a first map i like it all just take those pits away, because its a little random in an office place, but nice work 9.5/10 ;)

[sportingrules]

Well thanks everyone.

[Ninjasnip]

Way too nice 10/10

[sportingrules]

Am i doing good so far?

[KHJGDF]

WTH! This is too good for first map.
I give it 9.1/10

[Angelz Blood]

Remove the space pits, fix the blue table on middle bottom, don't put the glock and ak like four tiles away from each other near middle top, and yeah just work on overall spawn and weapon placement and choice (add some ballistick weps if you can and add more melee weapons too). Do all this, and it's a 10/10 ;).

[XGENSLAUGHTERER]

Wow, great map, especially since its your first. I don't see any tile errors, the only thing I would suggest in your future maps is make them a little smaller. There's a lot of open space, but good for long range. ;) 8.5/10

[deathrokzz_leader]

Awesome map..I also agree with Darkcomp, the lower part is somewhat empty. Other wise I would give it 8.5/10

[xfactor.guitarist]

it's amazing!!! a few problems in my eye, some weapons too close, but i give it a 4/1!!!

i was jk when i said this... sorry for misleading u.
i like it but there are some things to be fixed.
btw, i got a map slot i'm looking to use up, i'd be happy to fix the problems if u want?

[coolio]

If people can create this good of a map with so much time, imagine what things they could have been doing that are good for them in this amount of time. Also, there are too many things on the walls and it does seem cramped. 8/10, post this in the judging thread now.

[Shooter816]

Lol that map is awesome dude, 9/10. I don't think much people will insult the map. ;)