View Full Version : A Story Idea...
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 05:44 PM
I'm a very imaginative person, I'd like to think, and I always come up with really cool ideas for stories to write, and I just thought, 'Hey, why not post a story on XGen!?' So I thought about it for a couple milliseconds before clicking 'New Topic' I want your honest opinion on this, would you read a stroy that had a new piece of story every week or so? I'd lock the topic so no one else could type in in, but you could tell me if you liked that week's installment in a PM, or something.
Rambo
08-23-2003, 05:53 PM
that wudnt be a bad idea
Icek05
08-23-2003, 05:57 PM
go for it man.. as long as its not too long or anything.. then i probalby wouldn't read it
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 05:59 PM
You wouldn't read it if it was too long? Like how long would it be for you to not read it? more than two paragraphs?
Rambo
08-23-2003, 05:59 PM
what exactly is it gonna be about though
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 06:01 PM
Well, here's my pitch... I'm not TOTALLY sure of what the back story would be, but essentially, it's a cyber-neo-ninja (pretty much superhero) Kicking a lot of rear-end trying to... avenge something...
Trust me, the actual story will be much more well written that that post. I don't have much of the story in my head yet.
Icek05
08-23-2003, 06:13 PM
i'd probably still read if it was 3 normal sized paragraphs.. thats my limit though.. and in this situation for the story.. he should clearly be avenging the loss of his chair.. or somethin like that.. but hey i'm not so good with stories.. so i'll leave that to you
Rambo
08-23-2003, 06:14 PM
i'd probably still read if it was 3 normal sized paragraphs.. thats my limit though.. and in this situation for the story.. he should clearly be avenging the loss of his chair.. or somethin like that.. but hey i'm not so good with stories.. so i'll leave that to you
lol the loss of his chair thats funny
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 07:35 PM
Yeah, but I guess you guys could make it interactive, maybe PM me ideas, and I could stick them in the story.
Basically, this ninja dude is like almost invincible except to Kryptonite (j/k) he's like uber-fast, and uber-strong and he bounces off walls and stuff, and it would cost a lot in SFX if it were a movie.
Vagrant
08-23-2003, 07:45 PM
I'd like a story... It'd be better if it was interactive.... But I don't want a guy with super powers. I'd rather have a survivalist instead.
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 07:49 PM
Well, a little of both. I think superhero was the wrong word. He's very skillful, and a normal person, even with a gun, would have no chance.
What do you mean by a survivalist? Like, always running? My plan is he's running and fighting at the same time...
Vagrant
08-23-2003, 08:05 PM
Survivalist, as in 'ex-Navy Seals dude with lots of guns'.
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 08:09 PM
Vag, have you been watching a Steven Seagal Movie-thon?
Well, I think that the ninja idea is like the basis of the whole thing, but there can be survivists whose arse he can kick the considerable amounts of...
Vagrant
08-23-2003, 08:11 PM
I just hate it when the guy has the total advantage... there's no thrill whatsoever.
No, I was watching the first Tremors with the survivalist in there.
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 08:16 PM
Oh, ok, that explains everything! Including why Skye has five nipples.
I can make it so there's another superninja? You want another superninja? I can make another superninja! LET ME MAKE ANOTHER SUPERNINJA!
Vagrant
08-23-2003, 08:27 PM
Including why Skye has five nipples
What?
Rambo
08-23-2003, 08:32 PM
Oh, ok, that explains everything! Including why Skye has five nipples
ohhh they caught you Hype your eyes have been wandering a bit too much
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 08:33 PM
I TOLD you I'm imaginative...
Vagrant
08-23-2003, 08:34 PM
You're really strange you know that?
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 08:37 PM
Yeah, thank you, I try to be as weird as possible and keep my excellent grammer and spelling skills.
Danielle
08-23-2003, 09:08 PM
when i first came here i wrote a couple stories. had to travel pretty far back to find them though! LOL
http://forums.xgenstudios.com/viewtopic.php?t=1011&postdays=0&postorder=asc&star t=45
http://forums.xgenstudios.com/viewtopic.php?t=1132
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 09:19 PM
Wow, that was the day after I joined, and there's people posting there I've never heard of...
Rambo
08-23-2003, 09:21 PM
Yeah, thank you, I try to be as weird as possible and keep my excellent grammer and spelling skills.
wow thats ironic how you say that and you spelled grammar wrong lol
Danielle
08-23-2003, 09:23 PM
lol only u would notice that rambodike...lol
The First
08-23-2003, 09:23 PM
I'm going to punch something, seriously. I was about to write a story, but mine was going to be on Castle...
I can't believe that... Im going to write one anyway, HA!...
*huddles in a nearby corner with a pad of paper and a pencil, snickering and cackling the entire time*
Rambo
08-23-2003, 09:24 PM
lol only u would notice that rambodike...lol
somebodies gotta do part of kevinok's job while hes gone lol
Danielle
08-23-2003, 09:25 PM
go right ahead and do that...
hmmm...i am considering starting another contest... hmmm.....
theryman
08-23-2003, 09:25 PM
im the only one who said no... he said to be truthful! *goes and puts protective padding on*
Danielle
08-23-2003, 09:35 PM
eh i dont think he will beat on ya to bad! LOL
theryman
08-23-2003, 09:37 PM
just in case... *gets bat, shoves rusty nails into it* it would be a lot easier if it wasnt metal!
I'm a very imaginative person, I'd like to think, and I always come up with really cool ideas for stories to write, and I just thought, 'Hey, why not post a story on XGen!?' So I thought about it for a couple milliseconds before clicking 'New Topic' I want your honest opinion on this, would you read a stroy that had a new piece of story every week or so? I'd lock the topic so no one else could type in in, but you could tell me if you liked that week's installment in a PM, or something.
yeah that would be great as long as you put in irrelevence or spammer land.
and each week you could make a poll asking us if we liked that one! :D
Danielle
08-23-2003, 09:40 PM
u have a serious thing against spamers dont u? its like your a spamacondriac! LOL! JK
Rambo
08-23-2003, 09:41 PM
but you could tell me if you liked that week's installment in a PM, or something.
each week you could make a poll asking us if we liked that one! :D
wow arent those two things very simillar to each other i think so
Hypersolidsnake
08-23-2003, 09:42 PM
Ok, well, Vag, if you have some ideas... PM me...
Rambo
08-23-2003, 09:45 PM
u have a serious thing against spamers dont u? its like your a spamacondriac! LOL! JK
spamachondriac hahaha that deserves more than an lol it deserves a hahaaha. HE is agaist spam alot, but except for in spammerland who isnt
theryman
08-23-2003, 09:47 PM
he? i figured it was a girl. they have the word JOY in their sn.
The First
08-23-2003, 11:21 PM
I'm writing a story as well, maybe if Danielle gets the story contest up Ill put it in there. PM me with any suggestions because this is HSS' thread not mine.
================================================== =====
May 23rd:
“We plan on a Campaign against the Mighty Black fortress in the sinister, “Crimson Valley”, where a mighty sorcerer lives, unbeaten for centuries. We have a mighty Army of over seven and one-half million soldiers, all trained in the arts of war from the age of 5. Legend has it that this sorcerer is so powerful, he controls and bends the brain and can lift mountains with his mind. I know not why Admiral Vorkal would even attempt such an invasion, but as a mere Lieutenant, I have no say. My great grandfather, some legendary General, wrote a journal as I do now, explaining the unsuccessful attempts on conquering the black kingdom and just exactly what happened. In one entry he writes:
‘…Today we sent in over three hundred thousand troops, twelve thousand Giants, and five hundred suiciders and were left with four. Four soldiers. I remember the scene exactly as it was, Giants would rush in, and within seconds a sinister voice would thunder from above, “Thoralium!”. The Giant would stop in its tracks, grip his head and scream in agony. Their heads would expand, veins bulging, gray skin cracking, until everything would be deafened and they would sink to the ground in their own blood, heads split evenly in two…’
I shudder at the thought of rushing towards those gray gates, watching my brave men, sink to the ground as the giants had, slain by arrows, or thrown skywards, only to land on the hardened earth, shattering their bones in a second as my great grandfather writes. If only I could some how leave the Army and farm the way I was raised…”
“Lieutenant Dandin! Front and center!”, Came a voice from outside Dandins tent.
“Aye!”, he replied, scribbling the last letters in his black leather journal before, swiping his black-steel bladed fencing saber from the top of his bunk. Dandin was a tall young man of only 19 short years. Black hair like that of a sables was cut short and worn in ten different war-braids fell above his strange ebony, azure trimmed eyes. A birth defect making him sloe-eyed…
Vagrant
08-23-2003, 11:29 PM
That's pretty funny...
if you do i might read it if it is very short
Hypersolidsnake
08-24-2003, 01:26 PM
Well, Vagrant PM me if you're up for co-writing it wth me, and prepared to work with me to do it...
Aqualung
08-24-2003, 01:32 PM
I can help toss in some ideas if you want.
Hypersolidsnake
08-24-2003, 01:35 PM
Yeah, that'd be good, BTW, do you like my Signature? If you do, thank Psyddicus ('http://www.psyddicus.com/'), He has done any pictorial editing on my account
Vagrant
08-24-2003, 03:51 PM
psyddicus.com must be down right now, cause I'm getting red x's.
http://www.camaro.dnsalias.com:8008/Icons/redx-icon.gif
btw, watch this red x for a few seconds, see what happens.
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